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Thursday, November 9, 2017

Should Plastic Bags be Used in Supermarket?

19.10.17
WALT: Use the correct structure in a persuasive text.
Should Plastic Bags be Used in Supermarket?

Plastic bags are a really big problem and I’m sure everyone has a different opinion, some people think they're good things to have, other people think not, like me I think they are bad, keep reading to hear why I think that.

Our wonderful and gorgeous marine and bird life misunderstand plastic bags that have floated away. They will think that it is yummy food to eat. For example turtles misunderstand plastic bags that have flown away to be jellyfish, they think this because they cannot tell the difference like we can so they simply try to eat the plastic bags and choke while trying to swallow a piece. You may be thinking but they don't always choke, that is true but would you even want to risk it?

Also when plastic bags finally break down they release a toxic gas that can cause the OZone layer to have a hole in it, it can also cause cancer and raise water levels.

That is why I think we should not use plastic bags in supermarkets.


At the start of term 4 in Te Ngahere we did a piece of persuasive writing the title was should we use plastic bags in supermarkets.
Our WALT: Use the correct structure in a persuasive text. I think my writing is good because I used the correct structure but I also think that I should write more

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